Most characters are at best one dimensional. And others are so unbelievable that the attempts at plot twists are laughable.
Premise is decent, but the progression of the plot(s) are absurd and written more like a teenage romance drama than a remotely realistic story of the apocalypse. That may have been the target audience, but not what I was looking for.
Narration was fine for everything except the dialogue. When 2+ characters are engaging, you don’t know who’s speaking until the “Said Name”.