OK story that needs a better narrator

The story was ok. there were some inconsistencies that maybe less nerdy readers would be able to overlook, such as the interchangeable use of bacteria and virus. lol. The story also introduced the idea of different strains of the virus but never really elaborated.

The narrator was by did an ok job with changing his voices and bringing characters to life, however he did a terrible job overall in reading the material. There were unnecessary pauses between words as if he had to think about what was coming next .