Good Story. Bad Writer.

“This guy writes like a middle schooler,” said Max.

“It’s infuriating to listen to,” said Sadie.

“It’s like he has never read another author and learned how to intertwine dialog,” said John.

“It’s endless conversations of one sentence followed by ‘said character,'” said Cynthia.

“He somehow manages to make the great Kevin Pierce sound annoying,” said Chad.

Decent to good EMP story, and I’ll spend a credit to listen to anything read by Kevin Pierce no matter how absurdly short. But greedy to break the story into 5-6 hour segments. Should combine them into a multi-book package like many other authors in this genre graciously do.