The most of this is decently written but the amount of sexualization of the female characters (including a 16 year old) it is very obviously written by a man. It’s sad because most of the dialog is realistic and flows well until there is ANY dialog in relation to a woman’s body or a woman having sex. It feels like a weird roleplay written between a normal writer and a pervert writing a 16 year old made into a series which is…
The concepts and themes are fun and the narrator is better at female voices than male ones which is strange but fair – but ruins the immersion.
if you care about well written female characters and constant pedofile themes – avoid this one.