needs to research horses and their endurance. He mentions horses run 30 miles an hour and thinks they can do that for hours. mentions how a city is 80 miles away but on horseback it should take less then a half day. That’s very wrong. they cannot sustain a 30mph speed for a long time. A horse can go 20ish miles in a day comfortably so it shows not much research was done for this story. Kind of ruined it for me