Alrighty so I was SO excited to get into this book because I liked the first one a loooot. Right off that dubious consent came in strong and a lotta other red flags.
But, it’s fiction and Heart was always there to take you out of the ‘fantasy’. Not something I was worried about but it’s good to know if it is.
I don’t know if the writing was this dry in the first book, but it was in this one and this was pretty immersion breaking for me sometimes. but most times, it’ll end in a joke that’ll make me bust out laughing.
Narrator is wonderful, but is definitely working as best he could with what he had. Fortunately the sex scenes (which tbh are why I’m here) really made him and the book shine. It also helped flesh out the characters more than anything else. All in all, I liked it, but perhaos not a repeater like the first!