Pros
+ narrator was excellent
+ the story, while not unique amount litrpgs, was decently written.
+ action was written fairly well

Cons
– the two main characters weren’t very likeable. Henry was okay in the beginning, but felt like he was far too abrasive in the middle and later on the book. Not the good kind of abrasive.
– too many perspective switches. Like switching to the perspective of an enemy of the mic that is going to be killed, for instance
– interaction between Henry and love interest was cringy at the beginning of their romantic relationship. Seemed like the author didn’t know how to write dialogue and scenes showing this.