Really solid, I like the multi perspective stories like WWZ and this is a damn good example. It kinda leans into the cyberpunk aspect at parts pretty hard if that’s your thing. I’m personally not a fan of moody teens in all capacities and in the Carthage perspective there’s a noticeable amount of “angst”. Tho only real thing I could say needs improvement is character description as I’m not sure what Ellison and any of his associates would look like, and some of the action scenes lack something invigorating, like your scared for their life.