Had bad run in on harem books but this wasn’t what I thought
Pros:
– love the unexpected violence stuff, like some of it I didn’t see coming at all.
-nice to see that there are some sexual teasing and tension and isn’t like a Eric Vall book where the main character just fucks the female protagonist in the first 10 chapters.
-Love the reference to a lot of modern stuff.
-Love how everyone seems to hit there head on stuff.
-Great that when the female protagonist says she needs to recharge it isn’t by doing something sexual like most books do.
Cons:
-Don’t really like the whining for food during one part, like I get your hunger but like chill you can go 3 weeks with out food, you can wait the 10-30mins for your pizza.
-Don’t like that right as the male protagonist just drops everything to help the female protagonist and there all safe that he goes and thinks that he has to continue writing his book he was working on.
Personal preference but I’m sad that it’s a soundbooth production but there isn’t much background sounds and songs like some of there other books tho this is the first one so I might change.