this book is pretty good I’m actually enjoying the direction that they’re going with it and the technology aspect of it and using their knowledge of Earth to move themselves forward.
so far my biggest criticism is, bronze is not an natural element!! you can’t pull bronze out of the planet!!! bronze is a man-made material!!
my second biggest annoyance is, “he pulled (insert metal) out of the earth.” he’s not on MF Earth what the F is wrong with you!!! Congratulations you just pulled your reader out of the story by being an idiot. your hero was izakied to a completely different planet but you’re so stupid as a writer that you can’t F’ing name the planet but you say Earth instead? This is just plain lazy writing.
it really is a good story, if the writer would get their head out of their ass it would be even better. At least there wasn’t a political diatribe in this one. The marriage thing still doesn’t make any sense to me.
so far I am enjoying the story, until the writer decides to trip over their own stupidity every so offten!