Over all a good read.

First the bad. why include the sexual comments? The normal ones and the homosexual ones? They have no place and break up the immersion of the story. they are not often but enough to hurt the story. The story is different in a good way. Start is sloooow, and I gave up on my first read attempt. it does get better and then good. Last 12 to 14 hours got a lot better.