Here’s the thing, the world is cool AF, but I think the writing could’ve used one more draft before going to print. I needed a character sheet to keep track of all the characters and their powers and a vocab list for all the terms. It gets a bit confusing.
On top of that, the FMC and MMC are like 70 years old but behave like teenagers. I wish the writer would’ve spent more time on how it felt to live with trauma for that LONG and how the FMC’s curse and need to cure that curse influenced her personality.
At times, things sort of just happen and there are no clues or hints in the writing whatsoever that these events are even possible because of how the magic works. It would’ve been nice to get some more memories of the past to flesh the characters out and definitely more info from the MMC’s POV.
That being said, the sex scene was one of the best written in a long time so there’s that and the ending is phenomenal although again, I wish there would’ve been a little more buildup to the event so that you really felt the gravitas of it.