Corny in that some of the stuff is a little too obviously “feel good” but frankly thats something i could use right now! I love the main protagonist, how his issues are handled and how his friends are ultimately rewarded for being good people. It may not be true to life, and it may be a bit much but i sincerely like it.
The humor is good, the characters well done and believable, i quite like alot of the npc characters in the story. I think the author did a wonderful job bringing the game world, the characters, other players, the company and the npcs to life. I quite like the premise of the story and the execution was very good too. The story doesnt meander too much, and you really get a sense of what everyoen is doing with their time in the game which is something a few other stories like this havent done well.