This time, I couldn’t last more than 2 hours before giving up.
The narrator is still not changing her voice for the characters, so you don’t know when she stops telling the story and starts speaking for both the male and female characters.
The story is still falling flat. The main female character cannot seem to stand up for herself and basically does what the main male character wants her to, but she protests and then falls into bed (Great protesting). Not really too much character development or growth. It’s the same story in a different location.