I’m enjoying this series as a whole but there are a few immersion breaking moments but my current review deals with one in particular at this point. So if you’re this far into the series you’ll know who Shane is. In the previous books he’s been in he was portrayed as an older guy with a damaged past based off his interactions with other characters and how he was written plus being retired to the point he wasn’t in the period to be recalled to active duty but suddenly he’s young and a possible romantic rival to Brad. It just threw me out of my immersion. Once I finish I may come back and change this.
Review from Revive: The Last Omnibus WTF 7-9 →
