I enjoyed the story overall for the most part, but honestly, it almost seems like this was written by AI or something.
It’s light speed paced at times and just jumps right over important bits. It doesn’t linger on important character development moments. It just seems like it was a story told in a rush.

Overall I would say it’s a fun story, however the robotic pacing and not great ending are disappointing for what the story could have been.