So I liked the storyline. The fmc seemed strong in the first book like she was at least a gun toting forger with computer knowledge…but in book 2 that like all went out the window she was just another weak @$$ damsel with no skills except in the bedroom and that’s super disappointing. She wasn’t even the center of the group because this is MM heavy poly with group stuff that doesn’t even include the fmc at all. Ames if your going to make the relationship MM heavy poly can you at least give us a strong bad @$$ fmc instead of weak damsels? Make her a full part of the group she can be a warrior too not just a token vajayjay. If you can’t do that maybe give up on Polly and just write MM content so you don’t disappoint readers when the fmc is like the 6th wheel in the relationship?
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