This is a good short story. I thought the FMC betrayed her nature a little. People who are meticulous planners do not rush into intimate relationships. BUT, we have to have a story and MMC seemed like a god compared to the options in Atlanta—where the bar is in hell. I would’ve moved across the country, too! I’m not mad at Peyton for this one. It ended well, and I enjoyed the journey so I liked it.