Well, the premise was great, there were two thorns that stuck in my side about this story. The first is that the exact date and time and address was given before every single letter. All I understand this puts it in context, it could’ve been done it in an abbreviated way and was tiresome. The second and more irksome thing about this story is that the pro/antagonist was a haughty, self-righteous know-it-all grandmother and, although she eventually admits the error of her ways, readers are supposed to believe that 2 men are completely smitten with her and want to marry her. Could it happen? I guess so, but the author did not make me believe it.
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