interesting story, with a few oddities or pet peeves.

i do not get the obsession with these stories in making sure every 5 minutes we spend a couple minutes to reiterate the stats screen… even the reader points out skipping is an option which may be just as annoying. seriously does going tover the status window every few minutes improve the story for anyone? the story also feels padded with pointless ongoing silly references to gandolf which gets old fast.

however those aside the story is interesting even if some of the size of things was not well thought out by the author, its interesting enough to want to continue, but the gripes get old fast and that may make or break the story for some.