The story should have been titled Ben’s 3 Thoughts For 5 Hours. Literally nothing happens except recycled thoughts in Ben’s head. There is no storyline there is no character development. I would be furious if I had wasted a credit on this. The icing on the cake is the narrator can’t get an inflection correct to save his life. Do not waste your time or your brain cells on this one. I have never written a negative review because I do not think it’s fair to judge someone’s creative effort. However, when I found myself screaming at the book to just get on with it, I feel like I owe it to my fellow man to warn them.
