Interesting evolution path, great narration, interesting take on system voice and connections, great character growth speed, the mc feels optional to the story while uplifting other characters slightly, separate chapter stat sheets.
I’m a firm believer that having a character you can question and possibly even disagree with is necessary when writing a character. The MC was being so naive sometimes which to me was annoying but did feel human. Sometimes her being naive and being right felt a bit too convenient but it didn’t break the story. ( bias warning: I general don’t get along with naive characters. Not always but it sometimes feels like deliberate unawareness.)