The story was very entertaining.

The story was very entertaining, however there were a couple of things that absolutely got on my nerves. Characters that were already well established were referred to excessively by their first and last name. The constant repetition was unnecessary and convoluted my enjoyment of the story.
One other thing that was used to excess was the phrase, “narrowed my eyes”. Certainly there must be another way to describe facial expression rather than use the same terminology over and over and over and over. o
Overall I would recommend this compilation.