Basic story line is fantastic. I feel cheated the last 3 books have been more and more weak in the use of language and they were harder to follow. I got the feeling that the writer was getting tired of writing the books. Books that use the same word types or the same words every 6-10 word’s to describe or get the point across aren’t interesting.
I understand that sometimes a 4 letter word is the only word that will fully describe or really give the full power of the situations intensity. By using such words realistically and not over using such language your stories can have depth and direction into each puch. Your first books are amazing. A reader can easily follow the story with rather detailed vivid descriptions. I couldn’t put them down. My husband also enjoyed them and we shared them with many other’s. I hope see more book’s with more diversity and vivid details full of action and out of this world idea’s. If the writer can see, feel, smell and tast the story, an takes the time to put it all into word’s. Then reader’s like me a simple dyslexic great geart grandmother from North Pole Alaska will graciously enjoy your book’s and share them with many. Thank you for reaching deep into your imagination and sharing it with us all.