the story has way too much fluff in it. Noone cares how magical and otherworldly the mushroom tastes. all of the descriptors take away from the actual plot and emotions that the story generates. holy heap yall need to get to the point. stop putting words in just to fill space! seriously! describing fear ib a few words or feelings in 1 sentence is plenty. its like you get into your own imagination. we get it. its a magic mushroom!