Trying really hard to like this

I keep trying this genre only to find such immaturity in the writing that it’s hard to get into. There was hope for this plot but the longer it goes the more it starts sounding like mediocre fan fiction. I’ve got about an hour left. If my opinion changes, I’ll update but sadly I’m afraid this one goes in the “only if it’s free and I’m really bored” bucket. I paid money. My mistake.