The description of the incubus’s segmented wasp-body-like penis killed the sex part of the story for me. It gives me the “willie’s” to imagine what that would look like.
The narrator is well known and one of the better narrators but he goes a little overboard with his eagerness in sex scenes. I have to skip them sometimes because he’s too over the top.
(Bonus) It is fun to impersonate him to my friends because he is so comical and a bit ridiculous.