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Voice to MMC did not match. Was hard to get into Hayden’s dialogue because the narrating sounded like a slimey and creepy stalker versus an obsessed, loaded, and all consuming force. I NEED audiobooks to do better.

The female narrator read the entire book with anxiety in her voice and it was a little off putting. Even when having “fun” conversations.

Extremely frustrating. Main characters are both ridiculous. I’ve already invested too much time to stop now though. I’ll listen to the 2nd book with hopes they both get hit by a truck…. Someday. Not anytime soon though. Surely the story gets better. Narration was good.

It was so stupid. The troupe was bad, it was drawn out and long overly discrptive knock of haunting Adeline but awfully done

Performance was good, it’d listen to these two again. But the story started out good, but dragged on. Not much spice until the end, the FMC gets annoying and is kind of dumb. I spent most of the book muttering “it’s him, at least suspect him dummy.”

The story wasn’t all that exciting or dark or spicy. It was just underwhelming, it was an easy read but I’m not in love with either of these characters or their journeys.

The two books are really just one. For all that is drawn out, not a lot happens. The end of the two book series is anticlimactic, as it is heavily foreshadowed. It is left with loose ends and the absolute doormat of a female character doesn’t even pursue her hunches…like the birth control issue. It’s..

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Book 1 was fine The narration was fine. The story was terrible Dnf’ed at 50%

the main character is a huge crybaby who can’t stand her own two feet. her friends are strong women but her herself is helpless. she also can’t touch a man without needing him to take her virginity. beginning of the story was good until she got taken prisoner then turned into a bondage fetish.

There may be some differences and less “dominant/submissive” material, but this screams 50 shades clone. I am not a fan