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Narration ruined this for me

Review from Once You’re Mine →

I’ll be reading this instead, I’m only 4 chapters in and I do like the story so far. But I don’t understand the point of casting male and female narrators, only to have them read both male and female parts anyway. I find it super distracting and annoying. Takes so much away from the story..

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Cringey and boring

Review from Once You’re Mine →

MMC is silly and unrealistic, MFC is sooo BORING. How is he a prosecutor AND full time stalker/killer? And the MFC is so pretentious “gasp, I only wear kitten heels, how could I ever walk in regular heels?” If you want good writing for stories with meek MFC and domineering/sociopath MMC, look at Rina Kent’s..

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Ending it here

Review from Guardian of Earth →

So I LOVED the first book and instantly bought book 2 but, unfortunately, this one fell flat for me. This whole book just felt like filler. FMC and MMC constantly miscommunicate. Overall, it felt to me like the author had no idea where to go after book 1 and the characters were just pointlessly floundering..

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