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Meh

Review from Once You’re Mine →

The main characters are so over the top dramatic it’s nauseating. Calista is a weird mix of Pollyanna and sanctimonious that it’s off putting. Hayden sounds like a victorian gothic windbag that never stops monologuing.

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Review from Wielder of Shadows →

this story could be really good if it had a different author. i like the idea of the story but it is told very badly. the pacing is absolutely horrible from the get-go. and there is zero build up to the two main characters relationship. both of them are insufferable as well. lastly, the ending..

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Awful.

Review from Wielder of Shadows →

First book I ever DNF. The plot is recycled from many books I’ve read before, and the pacing is awful. There are many time/setting jumps with no explanation. The writing felt lazy as well. Though there may have been a good ending, I will never know. So mad I wasted my credit on this.

i hate calista’s narrator

Review from Once You’re Mine →

if the entire book was narrated by hayden’s voice actor i would have enjoyed it more.calista and harper’s (or heather? idk her best friends name) dialogue and voice actor was cringeworthy and irritating.calista’s voice actor had a weird tone or cadence or inflection (i can’t tell which) but i hated how she sounded.

Not my fav

Review from Once You’re Mine →

It was okay but honestly I don’t care enough to read the second one. I’m sure a lot of my questions would be answered in the second book but this just wasn’t it for me. 🤷🏼‍♀️

Repeated and Unclear

Review from Once You’re Mine →

It just kept repeating and dragging on. the Characters were saying the same thing durning their chapters and no build up to the relationship. The FC kept saying one thing and doing the complete opposite. And the plot lines were reused. Had to force myself to finish it thinking it would get better but unfortunately..

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