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MMC is silly and unrealistic, MFC is sooo BORING. How is he a prosecutor AND full time stalker/killer? And the MFC is so pretentious “gasp, I only wear kitten heels, how could I ever walk in regular heels?” If you want good writing for stories with meek MFC and domineering/sociopath MMC, look at Rina Kent’s..

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Not good enough to get me to buy the 2nd book, even after the cliff hanger. These 2 books should have been 1.

So I LOVED the first book and instantly bought book 2 but, unfortunately, this one fell flat for me. This whole book just felt like filler. FMC and MMC constantly miscommunicate. Overall, it felt to me like the author had no idea where to go after book 1 and the characters were just pointlessly floundering..

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This was hard to finish. The story and the narration. Just all of it bad

I stopped at chapter 10 and couldn’t go on. Every page felt like a copy paste of other dark romance books I’ve listened to. Not worth the credit.

This book is not dark at all! Starts good but female caracter is so umdesireble, when they end up in bed together it is boring .

This was not what I expected. I have never listened to a book and couldn’t wait for it to end just to get my moneys worth.

Wish I saved a credit..I wanted to see the Heroine have a back bone but it was not to be. SPOLER ALERT: She easily forgives the man who killed her father. Ughhh….

Narration was off with this book. Some of the storyline just grated on my nerves. The FMC seemed more naive in this book than the first.

This book reads like a wattpad fanfic a 13 year old wrote. It doesn’t flow naturally at all and was super cringe. I’m mad I paid money for this, it’s the only reason I made myself listen to the entire thing 😭 Truly the walmart version of Haunting Adeline. Voice actors were okay but the..

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