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Storyline was all over the place – def won’t read the rest of the series – very far fetched.

A mafia story you haven’t heard before. So many broken hearts and misunderstandings until you get to the HEA.

I didn’t like that when the female narrator was reading, she used a masculine voice for Hayden’s parts. I feel like those sections would have been better suited for the male narrator to maintain consistency and make the listening experience more natural.

Uncomfortable male narration. Normally the narration brings the character to life, but unfortunately, this narrator’s odd whispers makes it uncomfortable and creepy to listen to. I ended up switching from the audio book to the physical copy book because it was so creepy to listen to his narration.

I really struggled with this possessive relationship. The more I listened the more I disliked the FMC and MMC. Maybe because I simply could not relate or find any of it desirable. Personal preference. This was a rough read and it was 4hrs at 1.7.

I had to spread it up because of how slow/ how many sentence breaks there was.

Mafia romance Morally gray MMCEnemies to loversClose proximity Grumpy/sunshineJealous/possessiveSuspense On the runTouch her and die Main charactersJakeSawyer This is a wild ride with plenty of action and amazing characters. After a bad ending to a relationship that spanned close to two decades, Sawyer heads to NY for a change of scenery. She is trying to..

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I really liked the beginning of this book with how unhinged the mmc is, and then I slowly realized that this is really really cringey. I cringed about 50 times through it, wondering the age of the author. Serious Wattpad vibes.

Starting at chapter 27 the wierd sounds cut out the narrators then they continue at random times through the duration of the book. This needs to be fixed. Loved the story.

did not care for most things about this story. I did not like the vibe of the MMC, and the FMC was all over the place. the plot was not there, the narration was not great, and the cliffhanger didnt even leave me wanting to know what happens next. I will not be picking the..

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