Ending too simple. No pay back…doesn’t seem likely in their world of payback or payment.
Burt
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Authentic writing so good you can practically feel the recoil in your shoulder and the 9 bangers going off.
loved that the story was based on the history of Genghis Khan. I like stories that have history intertwined in the prose.
I’m a big fan of this author, but I found this story a bit slow. Hopefully the next in the series has a bit more action and adventure.
Reads like a James Bond fanfic with a dash of ‘the Democrats are the Real Enemy’ thrown in for flavor
I think I would’ve liked this better and enjoyed the stories more if the narrator hadn’t been so monotonous.
Awful story line and terrible narrator. Why are Ebonics necessary? It added zero to the story and the different character voices are ridiculous as well.
Peter’s book have continued to get better, and scarily believable, highly recommend, can’t wait for more!
so believeable situation, need to pick up the next one soon. thanks for the action and story building a world at war
