this was one of the most awful attempts at a dystopian or post-apocalyptic book that I have ever read. if you can get past the main character Megan you may be able to stomach the rest of the book. I think the characters needed a bit more work. however the narrator also played a part..
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It’s poorly written. the conversations are not believable. it’s a bad premise modern sword magic but different planet but obviously Japanese customs kind of. I don’t know I’m not Japanese and he doesn’t explain what is going on and why. time with characters is quick and he doesn’t do a good job at having you..
I had to read, the narration…
Review from The Watson Girl →
pretty awful
Review from Surviving →
this was pretty bad honestly. i found myself rolling my eyes several times. basically finished it only because i already paid for it. the characters are completely clueless and dramatic and everything. you basically get 1 minute of the story and 5 minutes of what that person is thinking. big holes in the story also…
Poor Narrator
Review from Surviving →
This was a fair novel of people completely unprepared for life after the grid. This is how it would go for most. The narrator wasn’t good, he has a good voice, but he needs to be taught that his narration can’t have emotion when not doing a character’s voice. Listen to RC Bray for how..
potential
Review from World’s Edge →
For young adults/teens
Review from Jurassic Dead Box Set →
Amazon should rate these books especially since they cost adult prices. The storyline sounded interesting. But the execution was puerile, cliched, and uninteresting. As I read the first book, I could feel my IQ dropping. I was disappointed & will not be finishing the series. I stopped reading the first book.









