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Maybe….

Review from Breakdown →

I want to like this. The narration is very off putting, and is definitely contributing to my issues with the story. The characters sound so weak and timid. I get that it is a horrible, world ending event, but….Dad is a 12yr Ranger combat vet. I’m glad he’s not written as a superhero, but he’s..

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Don’t pad length with details about firearms when you don’t know them!

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

The characters are one dimensional and the story barely exists. Where the story and character development should have been are long expositions about firearms from an author who clearly knows almost nothing about firearms but is trying to sound like an expert to those who know even less. Striker-fired pistols suddenly have hammers and safety..

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