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Very unique honestly super interesting world and characters

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I thought overall the story was incredible the first quarter I’d say was probably the hardest to get through but once I could empathise with the characters the more pain I felt …. It was beautiful, painful and extremely introspective I would recommend to basically anyone who likes more interpersonal storytelling but I will also..

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Another Story with a Disappointing MC

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The premise and synopsis sounded interesting, so I gave this book a good shake. It is unfortunately the case that this book has very simplistic “crayon” writing. It is rife with filler sentences often going over information just covered, and trite events that add nothing to the progress of the character or story. I was..

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Narrator Really needs to get aquanted with Japanese terms

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The history was nice, got a few complaints regarding the characters decisions and the fact that they don’t entirely learn the lesson despite the struggles (pride over progress). The thing that really throws the immersion for me was the mispronunciation of the Japanese words particularly every time the narrator called the sister ‘brother’. Aside from..

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Narrator speaks very slow.

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The first half of the book was incredibly boring, the MC’s stupidity grew as the book went on, but after chapter 30 the book did pick up, and I rather enjoyed the book from there on. I hope to see more intelligence going forward. And a tip for people just starting the book or wanting..

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