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The opening to the book leaves a lot to be desired, but about a third of the way through the book the author finds their voice and it becomes a much better book.

I love the pace and flow of the story. The story is rarely slow and I’m never not excited for what’s happening next. The narration doesn’t have any weird quirks or heavy mouth sounds with wonderful and identifiable difference between characters

I thought it was a fun listen. The one aspect I wish it would improve on is having the Mc like gain a familiar, make a steadfast friend, find a love interest…forge bonds. Mostly it is a book of singular drive.

Slow start that picks up pace through and ends on a beautiful note. Stick through the first few hours and be rewarded with a real powder keg

The world building and suspension of the story development is great. It is like peeling back a onion.

I like that William, is Middle age even though he evolved and looked younger. Most Lite RPG’s I have read all centered around young adults. William class is interesting since it is not combat oriented. love the book.

the main character is all over the place… She’s an enigma. She’s at times super tough, clever, intelligent, resilient, self reliant (wants to be at least), hard working, mama bear badass. Then.. she’s annoying, thoughtless, entitled, egotistical, narcissistic, not very bright (at times downright clueless) cmplete bitch of woman.After writing all that.. I’m thinking that..

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The premise of the book doesn’t get touched on till almost the end of it and the last 30 min was all recap…. Totally not needed because the MC’s stat sheet is shown so often throughout the book.Almost nothing storyline-wise was accomplished.