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Needs an Editor

Review from The Complete Age of Collapse Series →

Interesting characters but I found it distracting how certain words are used so repetitively and not quite correctly. To me, the author would be better off using common language. Every reference to a dog‘s mouth doesn’t have to be “maw” especially when the dog is licking his chops awaiting a treat. “The murk” could occasionally..

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Hits the religious nut checklist

Review from Sanctuary →

Narrator was good, as always. The first half of the book was good, and would have possibly been my favorite one of the series. Possible spoilers below. ….A giant fast spreading fire, near death experiences in a river during a shootout, lots of fast paced action and a lot less of the monotonous inner monologue..

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Geographical impossibly.

Review from Jack Frost →

I absolutely love the Stratton series. However, how is is possible for Replacement to look up at the mountain that Jack is on? From Derrington?I realize it’s a fictional story, but dang. maybe Santa can fly everyone back to town.

No one Talks Like That

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

The story line was good, if a bit predictable.The narrator does not seem to have ever met a teenager or have any idea how they inflect or anything about cadence. It was like listening to a poorly acted high school play. The telling of the story should have enhanced it, but it detracted from it.