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Review from Last Light – The Complete Series →

First off, congratulations to the author for accomplishing his dream and being published. That said, he has a long way to go before achieving any level of satisfactory entertainment. The author is way too fond of adverbs and apparently is under the illusion that regurgitating the same information over and over is good storytelling. The..

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meh

Review from The Grand Game, Book 1 →

Nothing felt original and the writing style bugged me. I almost never complain/critique like this, but basically, I didn’t enjoy being immersed in the story as this character.. I couldn’t tell if the MC was a dumdum or he, his thoughts, and all the dialogue were just poorly written. Despite all that, I might still..

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Hideous, Cruel Daughter Ruins Series

Review from Collapsed World →

As it was in the prior book of this series, the newly found Mae, daughter of estranged Laurel and Bear (the adult protagonists of this series) thoroughly annoyed me. She just is not a good person, and her redemption was too little, too late. I couldn’t understand the way she thought through most of this..

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