I thoroughly enjoy your books. I will say they tend to lack a lot of character background, especially characters with military background. Look if your gonna say a character is an ex SEAL, don’t then write that the exSEAL is learning tracking an trapping from his new girlfriend. You may not see how that could..
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My Favorite LitRPG Series
Review from World Nexus →
I’d play this game!
Review from Wolf in the Void →
the story plot
Review from Long Lost →
The story thus far has captivated me to need to know what happens next. The acting is amazing and I know which character the book is referring to just by the voice. The only downside I’d say through out the listen is the younger female characters sound the same i.e saya and the ghost wolf…
Ok, I would like to start off by saying this book has a great concept and the characters are great, even the narrator is good, BUT let me tell you how much I despise the MC. Minor spoiler ahead Issue 1:is the unacceptable the amount of inner monologue/dialogue. I’m about 6 and a half hours..








