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Ugh, Dastardly, Dim-Witted Daughter

Review from Divided World →

The overarching story takes a decided turn in this fourth book of the series. This book focuses on Laurel and Bear finding their “adult” daughter, Mae. I say “adult” with a degree of “caveat” because she seems more adolescent—and not in a good way—than a true adult. Given that this is a big country—the United..

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The reader needs to be more familiar with Japanese pronounciation

Review from The Sword of Kaigen: A Theonite War Story →

Story-wise, engaging enough but something I can’t put my finger on seems lacking. Nice world building if a little excessive. Ciranu? Dinma? Unnecessary details that obscure things. Pacing leaves something to be desired. Style-wise, pretty well written. And as my title suggests, the reader needs to be more familiar with Japanese pronounciation. He keeps saying..

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