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Strings of adjectives behind anything. Overuse of consonance. Overly detailed descriptions. Not a bad story line but the editor or writer wastes too much time being overly verbose.

I was hoping to snag a good 3 book value. Sometimes it felt like the author got lost in the thoughts of the characters and at times choices just seemed very unrealistic. I also had a tough time with the narrator or it was the way the story went. I listened to all three books..

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Struggled very hard to finish, had to fast forward a lot. I like the characters but not the storyline

I can’t wait for book 2 a awesome world a grate mc and interesting style of system-powers wonderful side characters and more well worth the listen-read.

This was such a satisfying conclusion the the the trilogy. I wouldnt mind more books but that was a perfect ending if there are no more. I laughed. I cried. My face is soar from all the jokes and perfect moments.

Couldn’t help but to get caught up in this series. I laughed, I cried, I listened with eager anticipation as to what was going to happen next!

Loved this book, interesting take on the Bible’s storys. I am looking forward to more by this author.

This story has a lot of potential. I like the powers, fighting, deceptions, plot, and twists. But the majority of the book has a MC that sneaks around alone and over thinks most of every moment. Some parts are so boring during the dungeon dive that the MC is even falling asleep. There is just..

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But to be honest Wyatt must be the worst Navy seal ever. It was almost like he had no real training whatsoever. And Megan’s inner dialogue’s got a little monotonous

I’ve learned that authors who write on Royal Road or Patreon are “by seat of one’s pants” writers. This makes things happen pretty quickly in their stories and usually is great fun …in the beginning. Unfortunately, if you write like this you’ll inevitably create too many things to keep track of. You’ll need something exciting..

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