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Entertaining but not captivating

Review from This Quest Is Broken! →

The story concept was very interesting, but the actual implementation of the story rapidly went straining. Main character can be likend to sweet and sour pork. Delicious at first but mediocre as you eat more. The only real character development is through their stats increasing. The humor is largely limited to banter between the party..

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I love this series

Review from This Guild Is Batty! →

Seriously, this series is funny, has great pacing and doesn’t have to sacrifice the story to achieve either of these. From my experience, three books in is where lots of writers or narrator’s start to get lazy, not the case with This Guild is Batty! I am really looking forward to watching the characters continue..

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Storyline good

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

The storyline is good . I did return this book without finishing it . I found it too wordy , every detail ,every action and too much of what the characters say is explained . I don’t know how old this author is but the writing passes for a high school student .

PLEASE MORE !!!

Review from The Grand Game, Book 1 →

please Dear Author I love this book and can’t wait for more hurry. Need more …this book was awesome and the MC was pretty likeable not a dumbass like most authors make there’s for some reason. Seriously good story and development.