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An ending you won’t see coming !

Review from The Watson Girl →

This book was very good but I didn’t care for all the swearing even though I understand why the author used it. I know authors want their books to be realistic but I have read many that didn’t include swearing to make it that way. The story itself was excellent and I certainly didn’t see..

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Too much inner dialog…

Review from The Grand Game, Book 1 →

The MC has too much thought in action scenes. The excess inner dialog makes things drag. I also find the MC a little dense for my tastes. I will give the next book a shot if it’s slim on selection, but drop this if the continuation is more of the same.