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These Are Not Well Written

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

The topic and the overall concept of the storyline is decent and interesting. The finer details of the story, what the author chooses to fixate on, the character dialog used, and the pace of the story are all quite poor. Very slow, constantly bordering on uninteresting & repetitious. If I wasn’t in between dates for..

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It won’t end

Review from Sanctuary →

This story just won’t end. Wrap it up already. If I have to listen to Ben soliloquize and mansplain why he didn’t want to do the thing he’s getting ready to do in front of the kids I’ll drive an ice pick into my eardrums