Review from Edge of Eons →
The narrator pauses in odd spots and constantly uses terrible inflection. The writing is redundant. I kept imaging this book being written and read to me by a 7th grade teacher. It was a cool premise for a story but poorly written and read. I probably won’t listen to the second one.
I tried, honestly I did. But this is the worst book and series. I listened to the entire first book and part of the second. There is no way a former Army Ranger would possibly talk, think or act the way portrayed. The story line ambles along like there was no prior planning and just..
Review from Edge of Eons →
This story presented it self as a gamelit mixed with cultivation story. If your not familiar that is a mixture of the Chinese genre called wuxia or xanxia. on this site that would be A thousand steps first stop or the Cradle series by Will Wight. This story is not that . Gamelit or litRPG..
Review from Cold Kill: A Thomas Caine Novella →
Warren has done it again. Great read and continuation of the Cain series. Loved it
The first two books of this series started bad and got worse. Not going to waste my time reading this last book. Characters were absolute morons, proving that you just can’t fix stupid!
Review from Final Panic →
First series by this author I am unable to complete. Very childish character development. Can’t believe I paid the trilogy. ?
I am really really struggling through this book. The story is must “ok”. The narrator is really really HORRIBLE. He speaks in like a “cartoon voice” for each of the characters. The characters come across as being less than “all there”……It is so bad lol. I was going to read more of the series, but..
Review from Mozari Arrival →
This book, in my opinion, had several weaknesses in the development. It was difficult to start enjoying because the story had a slow start. I did not like the way the author developed the lead character (Daniel West)! He is childish, self-occupied, and then focuses on a love interest, which was totally inappropriate, given that..
Whoever wrote this has zero concept of war no understanding of the word strong or strength,which he used in every other sentence. A complete failure with so much promise unfulfilled. Book one, wow, book 2 meh, book 3 total flop.
The hero repeatedly trips on the roots of trees, I was waiting for his enemy to tie his shoelaces together and pull his hat down over his eyes. Every woman he meets is the most beautiful woman hes ever met. CTFO. You went full ret@rd, you never go full ret@rd!