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wake up call

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

this book was sad in so many ways but the character growth and development was well written. Ben and Joel are both who we hope to be or meet if this were a real world scenario. I titled my review “wake up call” because I feel like the scenario is not too far from being..

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entertaining idea, but painful writing

Review from Jurassic Dead Box Set →

good idea- but author forgets where characters are, which creatures are in play, writing is choppy and messy- things like ‘one thing on their mind-‘ names 3. odd phrasing- there is a difference between thrashing humans and humans thrashing etc etc. logic errors….the largest X then names a ridiculously understated size and weight for that..

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Two writers

Review from The Complete Age of Collapse Series →

I figured there were two writers, the father who came up with a good story and a 15 year old son who wrote the dialogue. Does anyone really talk like this. Too bad the narrators sounds like reads to us like we are 3rd graders.