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I have to hand it to the author. He does not lack for stamina. Even if it means, he’s gotta tell the same story over and over again.our heroes are well armed they fight well and the vast majority of humans who have turned evil and are ready to take what they need Fall to..

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I love this series! The characters and storyline is phenomenally amazing! Can’t wait for book 10!

Why can’t you put it all in one book I spent more time finding and keeping them in order

Was a five star throughout most of the book but I was kind of disappointed with the ending. While I can appreciate the message in an open ending, I prefer more closure. The fault isn’t in the story but in my own expectations, that being said I’m still left somewhat disappointed and so the rating..

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Great for a fifteen year old. So silly talking about what guns he has how much ammo. plus did you know a red dot is for shooting at longer distances, hmm me neither

First person exposition with no character interaction. Had to dump it after thirty minures. It’s like listening to a coworker telling a bad vacation story.

i. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.ii. Never use a long word where a short one will do. ili. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. iv. Never use the passive where you can use the active.v…

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Narrator is decent – don’t know how he could take this series seriously. Good premise but awful execution. 80% of each book is 10 min of the MC’s internal rehash of most recent events followed by 5-8 minutes of internal rationalization for what he is about to do next. This internalization occurs BEFORE EVERY ACTION..

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this is a very unlikely and poorly written storythe author should take the time to research the subject and people

If I hear “she bit her lip” one more time………that phrase was way overused. Story was good, I listened to it almost straight through. Good characters.