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good story and characters

Review from 24-Hour Warlock →

I enjoyed the book alot but I just couldn’t stand the little girl constantly freaking out I was ok with it in the first book cause well her mom died but it’s just super annoying now and as soon as it became apparent she was gonna be tagging along I couldn’t help but to groan..

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Worth it

Review from Dead Tired I →

I don’t normally spend a credit on such a short book, but Ravensdagger is completely worth it. The dramatization is just the chocolate peanut butter cookie on the top.

Pretty good book, great narration!

Review from Bunny Girl Evolution 1 →

Interesting evolution path, great narration, interesting take on system voice and connections, great character growth speed, the mc feels optional to the story while uplifting other characters slightly, separate chapter stat sheets. I’m a firm believer that having a character you can question and possibly even disagree with is necessary when writing a character. The..

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fun as hell

Review from Sequel.exe →

Uh..yeah…fun as hell. Wonder if this is another throwaway, though. Seems like the most fun things are created when the creator doesn’t have much of an emotional stake in the creation. If this were both well-made and respected by the creator, that would be nice to hear. It’s like magas XLR or samurai Jack….I assume..

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