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Strike Three you’re out

Review from Dungeon in the Clouds →

Strike one: No motivation (or any kind of defining characteristics) for the main character. I’ve read and enjoyed other stories which had this problem to begin with, but it’s still a mark against it.Strike two: Characters are idiots. this is also a common and forgivable sin, but this book takes it to incredible levels. we’ve..

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Awesome book

Review from Riftside 2 →

Very fun and entertaining. Keeps you riveted all the way through, But thinking Rock should have a imaginary pet in the empty space to talk to like a Platypus.

Slop, the bad kind

Review from Demon Card Enforcer →

I like a power fantasy as much as the next guy, but this was terrible. The main characters were so wooden I thought someone gave them a Marionette debuff. I could not believe half the things they did. One example, if I woke up in a strange man’s car and he told me we were..

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it was a good start to a new series.

Review from Riftside 1 →

the book had a lot of intrigue and world building. the dynamics between the characters was great except one character who I won’t name as it’s a spoiler but their childishness gets really really annoying very quickly lol. all in all it was a good start.